Do I hear front page?...
I think I do ^.^
One thing... please don't use counter-strike stabbing sounds... the soundbite is so overused and over a 50,000 people play the game, probably a lot more, so its really easy to recognize.
Other than that. You could have done a better job on the snow-fall at the very end, and the intro was awkward with no sounds... showing your name twice... veeeery slowly. I'm just nit-picking so you're next chapter will be absolutely perfect! Great job, honestly!