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roflmao.. XD

dude.... hahaha The ending was jus hilarious man. I like your kinda humor. Keep it up :D

dude seriously...

ok so... at least its not the same crap again... but it was like 2 seconds long. Why don't you make an entire episode and then upload it... not segments of chapters of partial episodes... kthxb

Ok seriously... this has to end...

These fu#$ing cut-n-paste submissions have to stop. If you arn't smart enough to make individual flash movies then please stop wasting our time by posting this crap over and over and over again. The first one wasnt funny, and neighter are the next 50 you upload...

It's really good but...

I don't know if you care about these things but here are a few tips to make you next movie better! :D...

- please spellcheck, its not that hard and if you just type everything up in microsoft word before you put it in it would make your flash more credible.
- Do you know how far "half a mile" is? It's not that far... they could have made it to the inn... check your content.
- Rose seemed kind of angry for no reason.. maybe add some facial expressions like frowned eyes or something to enhance the movie. Same with Rigger, he's cool... make him mad :D.
- It was kind of weird that the font went from bold to unbold in the middle of the movie. You may wanna watch for that.

I really love the story! It's excellent. It keeps my attention well. The concept of the edge, and the overworld are really unique and I can't wait until you make a 4th!

Confuzzled responds:

They were all good points and I will remember them for part 4 (I mean it) but I DO put it htought word for the spellings >_< It might be because I'm useing a UK version of Word and we spell things different form the US or somethign like that. Also it was almost nightfall and monsters come out at night (strong ones) so it wouldent be safe for them to travil alone. Thank you again for your help and I'll see if I can fix up the bugs for part 4!

It's not flash but hey :D

excellent lol... being an insomniac myself, all I see are infomercials. -_- thank god for dvdz... Good show ol' chap!

(YOU GET A 10 IN VIOLENCE!!! CUZ!! cuz knives are sharp!)

gel responds:

What do you mean it's not flash? Because there was about 4 seconds of video in this 30 second long Flash file, suddenly all the drawings I made, the code I wrote, and how it was all put together means it's not Flash? What about the easter eggs, surely THOSE are Flashy! Glad you liked it.

what that suppost to be funny?...

I'm very confused... it was just randomness... utter randomness... -_- The animated hands were well done... but.. uh WTF! clerify! :D

Do I hear front page?...

I think I do ^.^

One thing... please don't use counter-strike stabbing sounds... the soundbite is so overused and over a 50,000 people play the game, probably a lot more, so its really easy to recognize.

Other than that. You could have done a better job on the snow-fall at the very end, and the intro was awkward with no sounds... showing your name twice... veeeery slowly. I'm just nit-picking so you're next chapter will be absolutely perfect! Great job, honestly!

LoLz :P Dude you gotta listen...

Your video was great man... but you need to stop your microphone from spiking. It sounds like shit and it made me hate you! The way you presented the blood scene was great tho. When the stick figure was standing there and the pole just came in and knocked his head off... that was hilarious!!!
... but then you used benny hill music and its just soooo overused man. Just look around, i know you can find some decent trax. You dont need that crap.

Great animation just next time organize it... or put scene selections.

ZT responds:

Yeah I definatly wanted the scene selection, but the fla was 200mbs !! Everytime I opened it, it was on the verge of crashing my computer.

Glad you enjoyed it,
Thanks for the review.
-ZT

it was... ok

You need to fix your sound recording! Get a new microphone, do it on someone elses computer or just make it silent. I would rather have just subtitles then this fading out crap or the sound-spiking when the kid has the mic in his mouth. Overall it's not that funny because the voice acting was terrible... so fix the sound in future movies and I'm sure everything will be better

rofl.... ok...

I like how you criticize your own movie at the end. "Short wasn't it?" lol yeaahhh... nice one

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